ash falls from the sky
gentle like snow nothing's as
it seemed anymore
.
gentle like snow nothing's as
it seemed anymore
.
................................................................................................................. consider this like a big stack of all my words and haiku that i've left strewn about--- scribbled all over paper napkins, my moleskine notebooks, post-its, twitter, texts, emails, my head, my desk, cafes, papers at the bottom of my purse, my walks-- things tripped over picked up, dropped-- and picked up and held on to along the way--- x c
my dad thinks i write
"yakitori" poetry
{he's an engineer}
.
1 comment:
Evocative. Could you maybe think about the title being 'Jesusita Fire' or similar? This sets the backdrop for your poem's central images, and helps the reader make the emotional connection to the last line.
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